Hi Haley I like the way you did really good on describing if you were a flood I remember when I also posted my "If I were a flood" Next time you could put your story on a document
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hi Haley I liked it how you told the what it will be like in a flood welldone shyla
ReplyDeleteHi Shyla,
DeleteI will consider your comment
Kind regards,
Haley
Hi Haley
ReplyDeleteI like the way you did really good on describing if you were a flood
I remember when I also posted my "If I were a flood"
Next time you could put your story on a document
Hi Haley,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your poem! It's amazing, I can tell you've worked hard on it.
Maybe next time you should check your capital letters, there's a lot of lower case 'I's in the poem.
Have a great day,
Tara