Hey Haley, Its Shaye as you know. I really like how you displayed your information maybe next time you could add more information. I did realise you repeated information. Maybe you could also add some facts about what damage it caused? And one more thing i think being in a group of two you would each pick a question or event and right your own piece about it? Kind Regards, Shaye
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Hey Haley, Its Shaye as you know.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you displayed your information maybe next time you could add more information. I did realise you repeated information. Maybe you could also add some facts about what damage it caused? And one more thing i think being in a group of two you would each pick a question or event and right your own piece about it?
Kind Regards, Shaye