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Thursday 2 August 2018

If I Were a Flood

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  1. hi Haley I liked it how you told the what it will be like in a flood welldone shyla

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    1. Hi Shyla,
      I will consider your comment
      Kind regards,
      Haley

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  2. Hi Haley
    I like the way you did really good on describing if you were a flood
    I remember when I also posted my "If I were a flood"
    Next time you could put your story on a document

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  3. Hi Haley,
    Good job on your poem! It's amazing, I can tell you've worked hard on it.

    Maybe next time you should check your capital letters, there's a lot of lower case 'I's in the poem.

    Have a great day,
    Tara

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